Monday, August 17, 2015

The House Girl – Tara Conklin





     This is a story told in two parts. It switches between the antebellum south circa 1852 and modern New York. First year associate at a prestigious law firm, Lina Sparrow, is tasked with finding the perfect client to be the face of a class action law suit to demand reparations for the descendants of American slaves.  Josephine Bell is a house slave on a struggling Virginia plantation. They are tied together by Josephine’s owner, Lu Anne Bell. After Lu Anne Bell’s death, her paintings and drawings were found and she was held up as a revolutionary before her time. Now, nearly 150 years later, her art is being called into question. Some claim it was done by Josephine since no rich, white, plantation owner could know the life of a slave so intimately. In this controversy, Lina thinks she may have found her perfect client as long as she can connect him to Josephine’s bloodline. Her only problem is Josephine disappeared shortly before her mistress’s death.

     This story sounds intriguing. The reparations aspect, a little family drama in Lina’s story, trying to find Josephine’s descendants, and the story of Josephine’s life itself should have combined to make a wonderful enriching story. The keywords there are should have. What we get instead is a story that pretty much goes nowhere. Lina is wondering about her mother and the history behind her death while searching for evidence of what happened to Josephine’s child and just does some of the dumbest stuff. Trying to seduce her mother’s former lover, a man old enough to be her father; not bothering to check for newspaper articles; not looking up the death certificate at department of vital statistics that as a lawyer should have been her second stop; or avoiding her dad when he spent the whole book trying to tell her the truth are not the acts of an intelligent, educated person. The law firm didn’t want the descendant of Josephine as the face of their law suit because he was “too white.” They needed someone “darker” to make it look good and, three quarters of the way through the book, the whole case was dropped for the flimsiest of reasons. Lina keeps doing the research though because she” must” have answers to the mystery of Josephine.  I won’t spoil any more of the story but the whole of Josephine’s story is unbelievable in the extreme. It’s not quite as bad Lina’s but it is still pretty awful.


     The writer has apparently never heard of normal colors, geography, research. If something is brown, its coffee colored. Blue eyes and/or blonde hair are described as pale and anything else is “dark.” The shadows were dark, the wood was dark, the house was dark, and all of the women’s hair and eye colors were dark except for Josephine’s (which were blue aka unusual) and anyone who was blonde. Every time Lina thought about her mother, it was the same paragraph about her fragrance, her laugh, her warm rich tones, almost as if it were copied and pasted every time the mother's name was written. The writer felt the need to print three entire pages of names while Lina was doing research into slave families trying to find a descendant. Three Pages! and then had the gall to finish the passage with “and the list went on and on.” There was no need for three pages of names, a dozen names would have done the job. I am fairly sure the author was trying to make a point about how ridiculously awful slavery was but we already know and understand how terrible it was. The author clearly did little to no research about the areas outside of New York that she was writing about. At one point Lina visits Richmond, Va. and travels to a town (that in reality) is 3 hours away. In the book, it’s an easy 45 minute drive, plus she keeps spelling one of the town names wrong. Yes, it’s pronounced Stanton but it’s spelled Staunton. As a whole, it took an interesting basis for a story and goes nowhere while being repetitious in the extreme and getting basic geography wrong. If I ever read this book again, it will be too soon.

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